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Published: 2011-09-08 00:20:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 327; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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She is the ghost of kindness,she shares a spectral smile.
Dead but not forgotten,
gone for just a while.
For in my sleep she plagues me,
despairingly it seems.
A curse lies on my shoulders,
her kindness in my dreams.
I had never earned it,
her vastly loving heart.
I am full of wicked things,
she knew that from the start.
Yet still she shared her kindness,
though I'm rotten to the core.
But then she had to leave me,
only then did I crave more.
Death had come for me that day,
too quickly she did see.
Cheated death and took my place,
she gave her life to me.
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Comments: 20
ScriptWeaver In reply to Kalypher [2011-11-30 01:23:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, it's one of my favorites.
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ScriptWeaver In reply to chris34583 [2011-10-23 04:02:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow thanks. Of all of my poems this is my favorite.
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ScriptWeaver In reply to DarkAngelOfLov [2011-10-23 03:39:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I wanted something to symbolize the plague of emotions in my character Troy. It's kinda personal too. I find kindness to be a haunting act. If you taste it once you like it. But when it's gone, even for a short amount of time, you miss it terribly.
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ScriptWeaver In reply to DarkAngelOfLov [2011-10-23 03:46:15 +0000 UTC]
If you're interested you could read my story to get some background knowledge on why this poem is the way it is.
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DarkAngelOfLov In reply to ScriptWeaver [2011-10-23 04:06:25 +0000 UTC]
I'll do that once I get through all my messages. I haven't been checking them that much and I have like over 1000 now @_@
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ScriptWeaver In reply to DarkAngelOfLov [2011-10-23 04:07:11 +0000 UTC]
Lol that's a lot. Good luck, I'll see you on the other side.
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XxSilentseerxX [2011-09-18 04:08:16 +0000 UTC]
This allows me more a glimps into Troy's mind which I love because Troy is hands down my favorite character I can defiantly see him writing this!
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ScriptWeaver In reply to XxSilentseerxX [2011-09-18 04:13:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks I wanted to display his great quilt and shame. It seemed to work pretty well.
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Relic-Angel [2011-09-08 00:21:52 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. The first few verses pulled me in from the start.
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