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Published: 2012-04-14 03:53:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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How absurd to use a word?How reflexive is an adjective?
How profound can be a noun?
Can I disturb with a verb?
How much power can be sent,
by a lofty sentiment?
No child only plays,
like is said in simple phrase.
Those are words that stand alone,
feel them hit your gut like stone.
Words should be something more,
full of wonders to explore!
Our ears, do something to relieve them!
Do not say your words, breathe them~
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Comments: 15
rioza [2012-04-15 01:56:14 +0000 UTC]
Wow, really wonderful!
I too really thought the ending completed the poem! The whole thing was amazing, though.
Lovely work, once again! I always love reading your writing.
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ScriptWeaver In reply to rioza [2012-04-15 01:57:19 +0000 UTC]
And I love writing stuff for you to read.
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Dream-Nova [2012-04-14 23:36:30 +0000 UTC]
Very amazing! I loved it! The ending really brought it all together!
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ScriptWeaver In reply to Dream-Nova [2012-04-14 23:54:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, thank you.
Thanks!
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ScriptWeaver In reply to chao195 [2012-04-14 04:11:28 +0000 UTC]
Practice, lots of it. Thanks. :3
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chao195 In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-04-14 04:16:43 +0000 UTC]
is this the poem you wrote in class?
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ScriptWeaver In reply to chao195 [2012-04-14 04:18:12 +0000 UTC]
Yep. :3 Admittedly I changed it a bit. XD
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