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Published: 2012-02-21 02:08:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 179; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description Standing in the rain again.
The clouds are dark, the streetlights dim.
Drops fall from the rim of my hat.

It's quiet.
Quiet besides the rain.

Why am I content here?
Alone and in the rain.

Droplets fall through me.
Together seen,
Alone, forgotten.

Still forgotten.

How do you count the rain?
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Comments: 25

SnoFox22 [2012-04-04 09:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Rain. I love it.

This reminds me of the monsoon season where you can sit outside in shorts and a T-shirt and still be warm.
then all you need is a nice marble floor to slide on...

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ScriptWeaver In reply to SnoFox22 [2012-04-04 17:59:50 +0000 UTC]

I love the rain too. But I've never been anywhere with a monsoon season. X3 And that marble floor sounds like tons of fun!

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XxSilentseerxX [2012-03-19 22:43:46 +0000 UTC]

You handle this really well I love the imagery and the scence it plants in my head

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ScriptWeaver In reply to XxSilentseerxX [2012-03-19 22:48:36 +0000 UTC]

It's just how I feel in the rain. Nothing more.

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XxSilentseerxX In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-03-19 22:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Lol doesn't make it less admirable

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ScriptWeaver In reply to XxSilentseerxX [2012-03-19 22:50:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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XxSilentseerxX In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-03-19 22:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Of course

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ScriptWeaver In reply to XxSilentseerxX [2012-03-19 22:52:59 +0000 UTC]

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XxSilentseerxX In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-03-19 22:53:16 +0000 UTC]

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rioza [2012-02-28 02:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!
It raining now, coincidentally.

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ScriptWeaver In reply to rioza [2012-02-28 02:26:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Coincidentally, it was sunny here today. XD

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rioza In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-02-28 02:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Coincidentally. x3

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ScriptWeaver In reply to rioza [2012-02-28 02:32:19 +0000 UTC]

I love you~

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rioza In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-02-28 02:41:21 +0000 UTC]

As I love you.

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ScriptWeaver In reply to rioza [2012-02-28 02:43:04 +0000 UTC]

I like that icon . Cute.

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rioza In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-02-28 02:51:30 +0000 UTC]

Me too.

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ScriptWeaver In reply to rioza [2012-02-28 02:52:51 +0000 UTC]

~~

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Eternaliferocks [2012-02-23 23:12:21 +0000 UTC]

I love this! Great work! Thanks for submitting it to our group!

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ScriptWeaver In reply to Eternaliferocks [2012-02-23 23:14:22 +0000 UTC]

XD You're very welcome

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J-RavenEye [2012-02-21 12:15:19 +0000 UTC]

This is really good
It makes me think of how I feel when I look out the window and its raining.

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ScriptWeaver In reply to J-RavenEye [2012-02-21 22:54:19 +0000 UTC]

XD Thanks. That's how I feel when I look out at the rain. XD Or at least, that's a part of how I feel.

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Dream-Nova [2012-02-21 03:36:29 +0000 UTC]

I love it. The last line really pulled it all together. I love the rain. Great job!

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ScriptWeaver In reply to Dream-Nova [2012-02-21 03:44:58 +0000 UTC]

XD Thanks! I was worried about this one.

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Dream-Nova In reply to ScriptWeaver [2012-02-21 03:49:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, you shouldn't. It's my pleasure

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ScriptWeaver In reply to Dream-Nova [2012-02-21 03:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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