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ScriptWeaver — The Fragile Light of Love
Published: 2011-06-27 23:14:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description My light is there.
My light is warm.
My light is bright.

Your smile a kind spark,
it set my soul aflame.

So here I hide this light,
this light you gave to me.

So here I hide this light,
I hide it out of fear.

What if you don't see the light?
My light would fall to darkness.

So here I hide this light,
the fragile light of love.
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Comments: 6

Kalypher [2011-10-21 03:09:16 +0000 UTC]

The subject matter and the way that you portray it as a light is a totally old and cliche one, and I'm not really saying that as a compliment.
But all the same, for some reason the last few lines made my heart melt.

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ScriptWeaver In reply to Kalypher [2011-10-21 03:13:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it's very cliche. It's not my favorite poem of the ones I've written. Still I appreciate the honest critique.

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Kalypher In reply to ScriptWeaver [2011-10-21 03:15:16 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.

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XxSilentseerxX [2011-09-18 02:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely work! I love the sincerity of this poem and the metaphor. I get a lot feeling from reading it!

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ScriptWeaver In reply to XxSilentseerxX [2011-09-18 03:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. This poem is about the same person as Hidden For You. Love is such a fickle thing. :/
Thanks for the suport!

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XxSilentseerxX In reply to ScriptWeaver [2011-09-18 03:09:06 +0000 UTC]

I know that feeling and anytime!!!

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