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A cold winter's breeze blows against my face,I Walk inside from it’s cold embrace.
I take off my coat and sit on the couch,
I look at the cozy fire, and think of seasons long past
As I think, I let out a sweet laugh,
for I know as I sit here, warm next to the fire.
Snowmen are being born..
Snowball Fights are being fought
And A Batch of Grandmoher' cookies are being baked.
As I think of these winter joys
this smile of mine, won't leave my face.
Because as I stare into the flames...
I know this joys will melt Spring,
with flowers, and new games.
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Comments: 17
pixie-closet [2004-01-25 13:55:36 +0000 UTC]
This one of the rare... very sweet and beautiful poem...
Cozy... I love it.
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allaroundblueartist [2004-01-21 22:09:53 +0000 UTC]
very good poem. i like it now that im not in a horrible mood. *claps. but i dont like the fact that snow has to melt. i wanna move to the artic so it wont. lol.... makes me think of christmases when i was little. fun stuff it was....
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shotputtinflirt [2004-01-20 23:28:06 +0000 UTC]
That is cute! I needed the happiness about now...
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StanelyJava In reply to shotputtinflirt [2004-01-20 23:39:31 +0000 UTC]
Glad I could help! Eh...I like it myself..Wrote it when I was 11..but..-shrugs-
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shotputtinflirt In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-25 04:06:55 +0000 UTC]
I have a story I wrote when I was like 12.... Its like 11 pages long on notebook paper but I am missing 2 of them or I migth post it.. Its really STUPID! LOL! I liek yours better!
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StanelyJava In reply to shotputtinflirt [2004-01-25 07:15:50 +0000 UTC]
Lol, I bet it's not. I think you should post it, it's fun to read what people wrote when they were younger.
I can rember being really little...like? I donno..1st grade? And my teacher made my class write a short story. I haven't seen it since I moved...but I remeber it was about Werewolves..and me saving everyone..
Blah blah blah. I wish I could find it! ^_^
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shotputtinflirt In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-26 02:22:58 +0000 UTC]
That sounds ummmmmmmm....... Interesting! LOL!
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shotputtinflirt [2004-01-20 23:28:05 +0000 UTC]
That is cute! I needed the happiness about now...
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allaroundblueartist [2004-01-20 03:38:50 +0000 UTC]
happiness. how i loath it. you have written a wonderful poem about christmas. how i loath that to. i like the thought of winter being joyful. i love snow. makes me happy. o darn.... i loath happiness....(just at the moment...but dont tell my mind that!) no really your poem was great. i will come back later whem im content w/ life and give it the great review it deserves....sorry about this.
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smileanddie [2004-01-20 03:26:12 +0000 UTC]
geh the happyness eating brain...<_< nice job hun...but it still hurts u.u heh.
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StanelyJava In reply to smileanddie [2004-01-20 03:29:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, and sorry about the happy. I don't it doesnt jive with ya well. -huggles-
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smileanddie In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-20 04:24:35 +0000 UTC]
<_< yeah....look at mah new stuffs
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StanelyJava In reply to Chrissi [2004-01-20 02:43:02 +0000 UTC]
Sorry about that. I'm on a very slow computer. Instead of switching from word to Explorer would have taken forever. Plus I can only have one program at a time. My grandmother had it saved on caps on her crap computer. I'm trying to get everything done, before this computer freezes on me. When I get back home to my own comp. I'll switch it. I'm really sorry about hurting your brain.
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Chrissi In reply to StanelyJava [2004-01-20 02:48:07 +0000 UTC]
Haha it's okay I didn't even read your explanation until after I posted that.. sorry! I still do refuse to read it until it's no longer caps
It really does hurt my brain!
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StanelyJava In reply to Chrissi [2004-01-20 03:26:25 +0000 UTC]
No problems. Caps are all fixed now. -kicks the computer- It's like Satan with a microchip. It gets joy for making my time on the comp, a cyberspace Hell.
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