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michellenguyen68 In reply to ??? [2015-10-14 11:40:25 +0000 UTC]
so sad and something many people feel make good lyrics to a song I think
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LittleFawnsPhotos In reply to ??? [2015-10-14 10:27:06 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful expression of such sadness and longing, anniversaries bring back so much pain
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Supach In reply to LittleFawnsPhotos [2015-10-14 10:31:18 +0000 UTC]
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OfOneSoul In reply to ??? [2015-10-14 06:57:46 +0000 UTC]
Simply beautiful piece, dear. Every stanza and every line is perfect. The beat flows so well and your turn of phrase is powerful, to say the least. Wonderful work, darling.
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OfOneSoul In reply to Supach [2015-10-14 12:52:14 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome, love!
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vanndra In reply to ??? [2015-10-14 03:17:01 +0000 UTC]
How beautiful. This had brought tears to my eyes. So much feeling and love in these words
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Supach In reply to vanndra [2015-10-14 07:55:38 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for your tears, just bringing my grief once again onto paper, it helps me to cope
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vanndra In reply to Supach [2015-10-14 10:06:23 +0000 UTC]
No , please don't be sorry. It is wonderful that you can share your thoughts. So many of us can relate in one way or another. I think sharing your grief in this way will help many people. I wish I could hug you in person .
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Supach In reply to vanndra [2015-10-14 10:12:43 +0000 UTC]
Why that is so nice of you, I now feel hugged and itΒ΄s wonderful
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OreoApocalypse In reply to ??? [2015-10-14 01:11:18 +0000 UTC]
Ooh this is beautiful. It flows so well~ and you really captured the idea beautifully.
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rongiveans In reply to ??? [2015-10-13 23:34:21 +0000 UTC]
Suzanne, dear friend I write to you with tears in my eyes for the beauty of your prose. Β For in it were stark truths and emotions and the final comparison of time and eternal love. Β Simply beautiful.
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KalineReine In reply to ??? [2015-10-13 22:13:05 +0000 UTC]
So very beautiful! I especially love this! <3
I love the emotion I can sense in this, but I'm also sorry for your pain. Β
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Supach In reply to KalineReine [2015-10-13 22:28:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, The anniversary of my husbands death seems to bring me back to square one with my grief
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KalineReine In reply to Supach [2015-10-13 22:31:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm so sorry... ;n; I'm glad you were able to get these feelings out, that always seems to help a little. β₯ And you're welcome.Β
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CoffeeChargedCanvas In reply to ??? [2015-10-13 22:12:47 +0000 UTC]
Β Β Β Β
Beautiful.
This isΒ very moving.
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ALBDreamweaver [2015-10-13 21:42:13 +0000 UTC]
On the one hand, I'm jealous that someone lit up your life enough to write something like this after his absence. On the other, I wish for your sake that his absence had never become a reality.
Moving piece.
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seek-and-hide In reply to ??? [2015-10-13 21:39:11 +0000 UTC]
The emotion on each line ... a beautiful poem.Β Β
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Supach In reply to seek-and-hide [2015-10-13 21:51:39 +0000 UTC]
The anniversary of his death , where you ask yourself how you got through such a long and sad time Β thank you Mayumi
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seek-and-hide In reply to Supach [2015-10-13 21:54:21 +0000 UTC]
Surely he keeps giving you the strength. You're welcome, dear Suzanne.
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Supach In reply to seek-and-hide [2015-10-13 21:56:31 +0000 UTC]
Yes I think he probably does
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