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TakayoTemujin — Rolling back time Part 1
Published: 2009-07-26 07:20:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 2455; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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This is a cont' story from the Predator Broken Tusk's series... now there will be no more novel reading from the comment's box now. The words will be with the comic now, i hope everyone will be please with the new style, thanks for the support and favourites!Next Page- [link]
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Comments: 31
is that predator?
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yep... shld have added some color..
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colour or shading ? I think your art look's good in black & white.sides it saves time brain power XD
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Like the ground shld be in gray color, define the environment better u know?
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C'mon, its ok. U cant read my brain, hahaha...
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That's good. It will probably help explain the story better that way.
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I think i need to add something more, i feel that something is lacking, but i dunno wad.
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It may be more detail in the backgrounds or it may simply be that since all your other pages had huge detail it feels lacking when it isn't, you just have close up of simpler things. my view at least.
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I think its the background, but when i think about wad i can draw, its still the same nontheless. But i think a touch of shading background might help...
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Nice touch throwing in the Predator 2 quote in the end. Can't wait to see this one.
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Hahahhah.... i feel that its more Predator style of talking u see.
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Becoz i feel that Predators are like a normadic clan of people, but with very high tech gadgets. They still prefer the old ways even with the high tech they had.
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A fusion of old traditions and customs mixed with some new age advances in tech.
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cool like a bite of his past or some thing right
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