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fotland42 [2013-07-04 05:43:15 +0000 UTC]

I guess the fact that everything's going down now means I will soon finally get to find out what the Prince's plan is and maybe even who he is?

At least I know have proof of what I knew about the Prince being a good guy.

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Siarnaq21 [2013-06-09 00:10:01 +0000 UTC]

"It was all Burner could do but flail about"
*All Burner could do was flail about
or *It was all Burner could do to flail about
or *Burner could do nothing but flail about

“I believe the answer would be apparent, Prince Eclipse…”
Called it. Accidentally called it, from the beginning. Although, that leaves me slightly confused. Did they do all that work for him, and just betray him?

Good chapter. I'm a sucker for a good fight scene, but that was brilliant.

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vulcanfire09 [2013-05-21 21:18:57 +0000 UTC]

Keep up the good work. I am looking forward to reading how this turns out. I like that you kept the fight fluid with the combatants teaming up and/or switching between who they faced, on both sides, instead of just having them fight one-on-one separately.

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Eenor5000 [2013-05-16 21:43:37 +0000 UTC]

You captured the chaos of battle while still demonstration the teamwork and order that the teams had practiced. Bravo! I have to admit, I was caught off guard by Eclipse being the Prince, but I feel I might have, at least, judged Kaos's character accurately. Judging from past comments made by Kaos, the whole point of his team was to defend the Ponylands as he knew that the current team had become stagnant and overconfident. I still think Discord is in some way tied into Kaos's team and eagerly await the revelation of what lead to Discord be re imprisoned.(Or perhaps not imprisoned, put in stasis to preserve his life due to wounds sustained in the war with the imps and the nightmare as I can't imagine him turning against Fluttershy.)

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pcdeltalink036 [2013-05-16 18:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Gah! So much going on! It's all coming to a head and the suspense is killing me. I can't believe the team lost though. It seemed pretty even at first and then they even made a little headway especially that moment when they beat the crap out of Junkyard but then it's like things just turned suddenly. However, after seeing that not only does Kaos and his team not intend to kill the element bearers and is also now going to fight Eclipse it still leaves me wondering what the heck is he planning to do anyway? Why fight the bearers at all? Just to prove you could beat them? Does it have to do with those other elements? And what the heck is Skillet up to? I was waiting for him to come charging in and save the day with whatever it is he had. Apparently he's a bit late though. And then we still have Discord who I can't wait to see what he will do when he breaks out of his stone prison. And dang it Burner quit doing things like scanning guards to make sure they're ok it's making me like you more.

Also, and maybe I just need to reread previous chapters to check this, but is this the first time Kaos has actually shown what he can do? I mean aside from being incredibly smart and what not. Oh this was such a good chapter and an epic battle scene even if the team I was rooting for lost. Keep up the epic work and I look forward to what happens next. Also waiting to see if Ultrapony is still even "there" at this point and perhaps he could rebel against the Nightmare or something. So many possibilities, so many questions, so much great action and chaos!*trembles with excitement*

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Chill-penguin [2013-05-15 11:46:41 +0000 UTC]

Wait is skillet Gonna be one of the Male elements? I assume zilch cant be.

And if skillet IS one of the male elements, does that mean we will see the return of Ironjaw? because that would be awesome, and Trixie did get a new horn, but that was the spirits of the Previous six, so it might not be analogous here.

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DarkonShadows [2013-05-15 04:46:21 +0000 UTC]

(Takes a sip of pomegranate juice) Ah that's good antioxidants. Do you know the story of the Persephone of the vegetation, daughter of Demeter who ate or sucked upon the pomegranate seeds and how she had to be stuck in hell with hades as his wife for three to four months at a time? There are always devils in the details and it is the winter of the stories discontent, savvy?

Last thoughts: Saw most of this coming from the get go and though like you said I wasn't entirely correct, but I was darn well close enough. Too bad I ate the popcorn watching the movie Ice Age 4 Continental Drift for the first time, at least the fruit juice makes up for it. Now is a time for the special 'KEY' moments to happen. Note to self: get more popcorn before next chapter is posted.

Oh and what are your views on the recent Equestria Girls thing flying about the fandom, good, bad or neutral? I'm trying to stay neutral mostly, but I dislike it somewhat.

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Levia-the-Dragon [2013-05-15 01:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, right before the Griffin attack was maybe not the best time to put that plan into motion to get those masculine elements and their bearers going, given that it'd set up the princesses for a fall and incapacitate the Harmony bearers. I mean maybe that is the plan to give them the room to shine but it still seems like a bad idea when there's dragons, Eclipse and Goldtalon's army to contend with.

Very cool fight though, varied and interesting, changing up who is fighting who... it did maybe go on a tad long because it was pretty much all fighting with nothing to break it up, but what was there was all well-done action.

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SandBlaster3000 [2013-05-15 01:47:32 +0000 UTC]

Well, that was certainly weird. Kaos and all the elements of Chaos (or whatever the male elements are going to be called) beat up the elements of harmony before the big bad dragon attack. Yet the Prince has forseen this situation. Hmmmm.

Maybe we'll have a Double Element quadruple rainbow finish, and the Prince will take his place among royalty? Lulu and Celly could certainly use a lighthearted prankster party to ease some of their PTSD.

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