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Published: 2007-03-30 00:47:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 3195; Favourites: 157; Downloads: 0
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Re-process and correction of an old image.To me, this image speaks to a life that is lost, and for the most part totally forgotten. A life in which there was a connectedness between man and creation. While modern technology has created great strides in growth and development, for which we are all indebted, there is also a loss that has been created. In a way, we have all lost a part of our roots, which help to create a sense of purpose, belonging and stability. In today’s world, there is a belief that we are all independent and separate, yet each of us continues to long for connection and to belong. And while me may believe that we are islands unto ourselves, like this old wagon, we are waiting for a discovery that will prove our value and worth.
THE FORGOTTEN by: kayarlynnean
Souls are wandering
Among this battlefield
Forgotten
What are their stories?
The tales they have told?
Are they forever lost,
Within a past not meant to be?
These souls are wandering
Searching for some way home
But they are trapped
They cannot get out
They are forever lost
Among this battlefield
Forgotten
What will come of their stories?
Of the tales they have told?
What will come of their families?
Of what they’ve left behind?
I’m standing here on this hilltop
I can feel their pain
And I am stuck with them
In a past not meant to be
Now I’m asking
What will come of their stories?
Of the tales they have told?
Of the lives they have lived?
I am being transported
Through time
To a past not meant to be
As I stand here on this hilltop
Alone
In a battlefield
Of loss
Now…
Everything
Is forgotten
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WayneBenedet In reply to ??? [2007-04-02 23:49:18 +0000 UTC]
For myself it is all in my head too. But there are still people out here who can remember going places with horses and wagons, and the Bourdary Trail which was used by wagon trains, is fairly well marked in spots in the area. There is a whole history here that seems to have caught the interest of so many people.
Thanbks a lot for your comment, it as grealty appreciated.
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FriXedAirwave In reply to WayneBenedet [2007-04-03 13:14:54 +0000 UTC]
Yes...that is right! There is a lot of people who can remember going places with horses and wagons and they are looking on cars and all this new vehicle with ''distance''! I personaly would like to going on places with horses because i love to hear that sound when hors run or walk.
You are welcome!
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mezcallipunka In reply to ??? [2007-04-02 03:29:19 +0000 UTC]
i love the message its really the true
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WayneBenedet In reply to mezcallipunka [2007-04-02 13:28:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, I appreciate it.
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sora-chigau In reply to ??? [2007-03-31 12:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful job! Your picture and your words are wonderful!
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WayneBenedet In reply to sora-chigau [2007-03-31 16:02:26 +0000 UTC]
thank you. I appreciate knowing you opinion on this image.
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sora-chigau In reply to WayneBenedet [2007-04-04 11:15:01 +0000 UTC]
No problem! I think all your pics are really great! You'd be a wonderful author as well as a great photographer! Do you write any?
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WayneBenedet In reply to Pascale-Marry [2007-03-31 16:02:49 +0000 UTC]
thank you for your comment and yout
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Darksamu In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 21:54:19 +0000 UTC]
This is a lovely old wagon, and I'm sure glad that you found it. In this world, it seems that family ties and connections, and even friends tend to start to loosen and weaken. Maybe our minds are just focused on other things, but I really believe that we do need to connect with the people around us better.
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WayneBenedet In reply to Darksamu [2007-03-31 00:33:37 +0000 UTC]
you get a big from me on that ONE.
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azieser [2007-03-30 21:28:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow that looks really nice the old wagon gear on the hill like that great photo! Makes me think of the old hay fields they used to have all of this old machinery against the fence lines that had been there for 50 or 60 years they had trees growing out of them and they were still there waiting to go back to work!
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WayneBenedet In reply to azieser [2007-03-31 00:41:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks....that old threshing equipment is still there. At least in this area it is still around.
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azieser In reply to WayneBenedet [2007-03-31 01:03:30 +0000 UTC]
There is a lot of it around here as well.
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mentallydeceased In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 21:13:31 +0000 UTC]
that is a very beautiful shot. but i've heard this time and time again that you should never split the horizon evenly keep it abit up and down... any thoughts on that????
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WayneBenedet In reply to mentallydeceased [2007-03-31 00:39:15 +0000 UTC]
Ideally, one would place the horizion 1/3 above the bottom or below the top of the frame. This is of course the ideal.
However, it is a "rule" of art. And as such, all rules can and should be broken, depending upon the intended message.
The discussion of course gets much more complex, and open to debate, opinion, personal preference and all kinds of other factors, when a horizon line runs at an angle, like in this shot.
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mentallydeceased In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 21:13:13 +0000 UTC]
that is a very beautiful shot. but i've heard this time and time again that you should never split the horizon evenly keep it abit up and down... any thoughts on that????
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NancyvandenBoom In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 18:45:16 +0000 UTC]
besides of the interesting subject....the composition is perfect, I love it.
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WayneBenedet In reply to NancyvandenBoom [2007-03-30 20:31:42 +0000 UTC]
thanl you, it is good to know whan people think that something is "right".
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WayneBenedet In reply to NadaMythos [2007-03-30 20:26:14 +0000 UTC]
thank you...and I an jealous that you can write my name in real greek letters...lol
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Qcaster In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 14:25:50 +0000 UTC]
well you know why I like this pic thaumadzo, it reminds me of days long past, of simpler times,
great shot.
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WayneBenedet In reply to Qcaster [2007-03-30 14:42:56 +0000 UTC]
me too....simpler times. I think they were harder in some ways, but also not so complex....hmmmm...nostalgia....
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mirator In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 14:14:02 +0000 UTC]
You are very right!.. and very nice shot!
~Olia
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WayneBenedet In reply to mirator [2007-03-30 14:43:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Olga. i appreciate it.
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Kathars1s In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 13:00:40 +0000 UTC]
That's beautiful! Where did you run across that?
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WayneBenedet In reply to Kathars1s [2007-03-30 14:37:17 +0000 UTC]
thank you.
Actually it is about 3 miles from where I live. I go by a couple of times a year, and almost alwasy take a picture, but this is the first time that i got one that I really like.
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peterzz In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 12:12:46 +0000 UTC]
Nice landscape... and concept too...
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WayneBenedet In reply to peterzz [2007-03-30 14:37:47 +0000 UTC]
thank you. I appreciate your comment.
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Kurura In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 11:33:51 +0000 UTC]
Woah.
Reminds me of Oregon Trail.. :]
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WayneBenedet In reply to Kurura [2007-03-30 14:40:02 +0000 UTC]
hmmmm....
Come to think of it, this wagon is very close to the Red River Trail.....(oops, I have the name wrong,).. any way, it is a trail used by seettlers and the NWMP to travel from Winnipeg to Western Canada. (In parts of it, you can still see wagon tracks).
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jml-fine-art In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 10:51:30 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful shot with a dramatic atmosphere! Excellent!
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WayneBenedet In reply to jml-fine-art [2007-03-30 14:40:32 +0000 UTC]
thank you. I appreciate your comment.
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rk2901 In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 10:41:31 +0000 UTC]
The image is more about calm and peace to me, but your description is still accurate.
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WayneBenedet In reply to rk2901 [2007-03-30 14:45:35 +0000 UTC]
thanks.
I think the image is calm and peaceful too, but for me, there is a tinge of nostalgia, and perhaps a bit of sadness for that which has been lost.
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rk2901 In reply to WayneBenedet [2007-04-01 14:47:31 +0000 UTC]
I understand that. However, I think some of the things we have gained are worth it. Or maybe my love affair with technology is blinding me to the obvious.
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WayneBenedet In reply to rk2901 [2007-04-01 22:31:25 +0000 UTC]
...there is no question about that in my mind. I look at how my parents grew up and how difficult that was. My dad was born just before the depression, so he knows hard times. Technology has affected every area of our lives. I just look at farming as just one "small" example of how it has affected the health and well being of everyone. Those are good things, and I doubt any one could argue them. Still, there is a loss, a loss of connection, family values, more of the person centred stuff. Would I trade....NO. But that does not mean that I do not see and sense the loss within or society.
For me, knowing this means that within my family I try to take the positives that have been gained, and I also try NOT to go along with the losses. I guess in the final analysis for myself, it comes down to choices. And that is what the picture is about too. The world gives us many things, they are neither good or bad in, and of, themselves, it really depends on what choices we humans decide to make of them.
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rk2901 In reply to WayneBenedet [2007-04-02 12:06:18 +0000 UTC]
Yes, that is a subtle loss, and I think that it's happened over and over again as the world has evolved; some things have changed ('improved') in one direction, while other things have been lost. It's probably a matter of every generation coming of age and starting to miss the times of its prime, namely the 'something' that had been a constant feature as they were growing up, and which is missing in the world their children are growing up in. As such, I can understand the feeling of nostalgia. As such, I can feel it as well, and I suppose that every single one of us misses a former 'constant' that they can’t quite put their finger on. I’m sure that even your father who grew up during some terrible times can share this feeling.
I agree completely with your second paragraph. I suppose it's all in our head, the world is pretty much what we decide to make of it, good or bad is of our own making, and it is entirely up to us to take what could be a 'bad' situation and turn it into something with some merit for our lives.
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Adaera [2007-03-30 05:58:14 +0000 UTC]
Excellent composition and perspective in this shot, it speaks volumes. Your words are very well chosen as well - and oh so true.
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WayneBenedet In reply to Adaera [2007-03-30 14:41:29 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for your supportive words.
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megan-alyce In reply to ??? [2007-03-30 05:57:23 +0000 UTC]
love this photo. i couldnt agree more about the loss of our roots. i think this photo really captures that.
its absolutely beautiful, in a sad way.
great job like usual
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WayneBenedet In reply to megan-alyce [2007-03-30 14:44:33 +0000 UTC]
thank you. I really appreciate this comment.
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