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Published: 2013-03-16 15:41:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 879; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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Description A little bit of redemption and peace for our Opera Ghost.
This image has been haunting me like the Opera Ghost himself haunted the Populaire for a while, so much that I eventually just HAD to draw it.

I'm very happy with how the fires turned out (which shouldn't be magically floating, but candles. Only I am too crappy and lazy to add the candlesticks :S)
But for the rest I'm not entirely content. Especially the lightning feels 'off' to me, and I have the feeling that his legs are too small in comparison to his torso, and his arms too long (I deliberately made those unhealthily thin btw. I mean... hello! It's Erik! AKA: Mr. Walking skeleton/living corpse Sorry Erik! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! AGH! OUCH! Don't hit me! I said I'm sorryyyy! Erik, forgive me, please forgive me!

Anyway, I'll probably redo this one when I feel like I can pull it off better. In my head it looks ten times better, I'm telling you!

But I still like the fires. And I think that it came out OK, given that it's the first time I made a PROPER attempt at good lightning (and failed. But one can only learn from making mistakes and correcting them! )

I love faves, but I love it even more if you comment! So if you really want to make my day, please place a comment! ^^ Constructive criticism and tips are also great! Don't be afraid to tell me what you think, I don't bite. And even if I would, I cannot get you from behind your screen anyway

I know I've got a lot to improve on, but that's what I'm here for!
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Comments: 25

reynagroff [2013-08-20 03:42:18 +0000 UTC]

I love the quiet, creepy feel in this painting. It's very calming in a macabre way. Lovely work!

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Asrath In reply to reynagroff [2013-08-22 08:33:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks lots

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reynagroff In reply to Asrath [2013-08-23 16:07:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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RedRoseBlackRibbon [2013-04-09 23:14:47 +0000 UTC]

Love the lighting. And yay for using Leroux Erik, since he's my fave.

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Asrath In reply to RedRoseBlackRibbon [2013-04-10 06:05:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for the comment!
And Leroux Erik is my fave too! Besides that he's also a lot of fun to draw!

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theLadyBarbossa [2013-03-17 03:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha... well, isn't this an image I've never seen nor thought of! it's rather... Calming.


~Lady B

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Asrath In reply to theLadyBarbossa [2013-03-17 07:14:49 +0000 UTC]

You meant ever seen, I assume? As otherwise you WOULD have seen it *is nitpicking*
Anyway, thanks a lot for the comment. Somehow it just struck my mind, and I thought... well... why not grant Erik at least one small moment of peace.

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theLadyBarbossa In reply to Asrath [2013-03-19 04:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Erik deserves peace.


~Lady B

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Asrath In reply to theLadyBarbossa [2013-03-19 08:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, exactly

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Mominator [2013-03-17 00:25:45 +0000 UTC]

I love the hollow belly, sharp cheek bones, and asymmetrical breastbone (or is it a scar?) So many artists are influenced by the 2004 movie - which I loved, and love the art as well - that it's refreshing to see an Erik who is truly scrawny and rather skeletal.

He needs some hair, though. Leroux wrote:

"All the hair he has is three or four long dark locks on his forehead and behind his ears."

I assume it's long because, well, you know balding men and their comb-overs.

Barb

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Asrath In reply to Mominator [2013-03-17 07:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
I love the 2004 movie too (the musical is better though. Especially his deformity is a lot better in the stage version. The 2004 one was anticlimactic)
It's his breastbone, but maybe I could better have made it symmetrical and add some scars instead. I don't know...

You got a good point on the hair, yes! I always draw him with a few locks, but I always find it harder than a full head of hair or completely bald, and I wasn't sure what Leroux wrote anymore so I just went with bald XD I'll keep it in mind for the future!
XD still I cannot imagine Erik combing his hair over to cover his balding. He just puts on his wig.

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RedDeath-OG [2013-03-16 21:35:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh, poor Erik is so adorablely deformed. I think it looks really, really awesome! You're right abut his legs though. Just a bit too small proportionally. But it's still amazing! I wish I could draw that well.

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Asrath In reply to RedDeath-OG [2013-03-17 07:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha, he won't like you saying that, probably, but I wholeheartedly have to agree! <3
It's also nice to look at his face when he's actually looking calm and smiling slightly, rather than being angry, sad, angsty or anything like that. Maybe I just deeply want Erik to be at peace like this...
And yeah, I still have to practice proportions/anatomy a lot. It's better than it used to be for sure, but there's a long road ahead of me, hehe.
Thanks, practice is the key, I tell you And being able to accept failure(s) is a good thing too. That nearly made me stop drawing a long time ago.

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RedDeath-OG In reply to Asrath [2013-03-18 02:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm glad you didn't stop. You're fantastic!

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Asrath In reply to RedDeath-OG [2013-03-18 13:56:51 +0000 UTC]

So am I.
I wouldn't know what to do without drawing! Or art and creativity in general. If I never had it I'd prolly be in a funny farm right now... or something unhappy like that (Or live under an Opera House and terrorize people? Maybe... XD)

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RedDeath-OG In reply to Asrath [2013-03-18 19:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Same here. Writing is my escape. And if that doesn't work there is always the friends I've met because I write who I can talk to. <3

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Asrath In reply to RedDeath-OG [2013-03-19 13:07:11 +0000 UTC]

Isn't creativity a great thing? <3
I would never trade it, not for all the wealth in the world!

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ElyssaJM [2013-03-16 18:38:50 +0000 UTC]

He looks really awesome, and I love the flames. And his face is win. Horray for Leroux Erik! I wish I had more to say, so I shall return when I am intelligent with a better comment.

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Asrath In reply to ElyssaJM [2013-03-16 18:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
Don't worry, it's a great comment! Thanks for commenting, I love every single one, even when it's not a massive essay on what is good and what isn't

And Leroux Erik is simply massive WIN! I actually used a skull as a reference this time, to get it better than the previous time!

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lucybond [2013-03-16 17:41:36 +0000 UTC]

I like it. I think his hip-to-knee length should be longer, because otherwise it detracts from his gangliness, but yes, I like it, thinking he has at least one coping-mechanism that doesn't kill anyone

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Asrath In reply to lucybond [2013-03-16 17:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I think you're right. I used a reference for the legs (the first time in my LIFE! O_O) but that was on a rather small woman, so I have been a little bit stupid not to 'upsize' the legs to Erik's big torso :S
I'll see if I can fix it without having to redo the entire section, otherwise I'll just leave it be and redo the entire thing a while later, when my skill has improved another notch.

So do I Somehow I really imagine Erik meditating or something, even though that just doesn't 'fit'. Maybe it's because I think he could have had great benefit from it. Inner peace, Erik, inner peace!
He has another non-lethal coping-mechanism though! Music!

Thanks for the comment!

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lucybond In reply to Asrath [2013-03-16 18:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh, true, MUSIC. D'uhhh, I think my brain's melted from editing all day.

"How would Christine react to Erik flinching like that, STILL" I mutter. Stuff like that. All. Day.

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Asrath In reply to lucybond [2013-03-16 18:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Haha, don't worry your brains will regrow within a good night's sleep
Writing is hard, I know, but it pays off in the end. Besides, I think you're pretty good as well I can write nicely on a technical level, but lack the skills to create a good story. I would need someone to brainstorm with to create a proper, interesting, non cliche, story
And I just don't have the patience to keep going either. Kudos to you for actually HAVING all those things!

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lucybond In reply to Asrath [2013-03-16 19:22:01 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks very much

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Asrath In reply to lucybond [2013-03-17 07:06:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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