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KomradApex — Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for Dummies
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Description Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for Dummies

So, you’ve probably seen all the awesome OCs floating around on DA. You may have heard that creepypasta OCs are hard to create. That’s not true at all, and I’ll show you why in a bit. Or maybe you received criticism for an earlier OC of yours. Well, even if your character is in fact poorly designed, all legitimate art is still art. So while you shouldn’t ignore constructive criticism, you shouldn’t listen to the haters. I’ve noticed most of those people don’t even do art at all and just troll the forums and insult shippings that aren’t their personal favourites. What losers, eh?

Which in a way brings me to my first point which is more about how to avoid criticism: don’t ship your character with an existing pasta unless you have permission. The original creator probably wouldn’t approve if they knew, and it’s just bad form. Nothing brings the critics out like making your super kawaii OC into Jeff the Killer’s girlfriend, and frankly I can see why. Besides, if you’re so set on romance why not just ship them with another OC of yours? That way no one’s going to get pissed off about the pairing, and if they do you can tell them to shut up because you’re their parent and they only date who you want.

Now, like every good story, every good OC needs a theme. What’s their motivation? Their background? Why do they do the things they do? And please give a better answer than something like “They went crazy, killed their family, and became a proxy”. To give example questions, why did they go crazy? Was their family abusive? Is that why killed them? How’d they become a proxy? Why exactly did Slenderman spare them? Did they have a talent he could use?

I find it helps to write a character profile/mini biography about a page long on size eleven type. Here's a sample one I made for one of my characters: shacklesoul.deviantart.com/art… . This will help give them a unique personality and flavour to set them apart from all those boring, generic creepypasta OCs out there. I can’t help you come up with their personality nor should I, but this is the fun part anyway. Don’t just ask yourself what sort of things they like and dislike. Rather, why do they like or dislike those things? How was their childhood? How do they usually interact with the world when it doesn’t involve killing? These are all just sample questions, I’m sure you will think of many more.

On the subject of your character’s backstory, please, treat dark subjects like rape and incest with respect. It is both disrespectful and ignorant to make them into some throwaway little feature. Not only does adding “And they were raped” really add nothing, it turns something which is incredibly dark into an unimportant detail. If you have to use these subjects, remember, use them as an important subject of horror and revulsion to make your character more tragic, not a teensy footnote. Believe me, if sexual abuse is treated as though it is just another detail it feels tacked-on and makes you as the author seem both uncaring and unimaginative.

Now that we’ve got that out of the way, we’re onto an aspect you probably already have in your head: physical appearance. What they look like, in other words. Let your imagination run wild; remember, this is horror so anything scary is possible. If you’re really having trouble thinking of something that hasn’t been done before, come up with a list of interesting details and then pick and choose ones which work well together until you have your character. As for drawing them, well, I’m more of a writer so you could probably teach me more in that area!

One last little thing about appearances. MASKS. F*&%ING MASKS. Why does every pasta have to have a mask now?! Okay, two of my OCs have masks but they’re at least original masks, not knockoffs of Eyeless Jack’s that were probably made in China! Seriously. Why masks? Sorry, it’s just a real pet peeve of mine. Masks aren’t bad, they’re just a little overdone so if you give your OC a mask, make it a damn good mask.

And that’s pretty much all I know. OCs are a lot of fun, and remember, no one’s OCs are perfect in the rough draft but just keep refining it and you’ll get better. Listen to the good advice you get, ignore the haters, and most of all be creative!
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Sesshomarul182 In reply to ??? [2015-05-07 19:57:01 +0000 UTC]

Ok I have a Oc that is supposed to be a CP her face looks scary ( I think it) but can her clothes be like them from a normal person like Eyeless Jack clothes, because he wears a Hoodie and I think a jeans. And the only creepy thing about his look is his face/mask.

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KomradApex In reply to Sesshomarul182 [2015-05-07 20:05:02 +0000 UTC]

I suppose she can have mundane clothes, just so long as they aren't too cute or impractical.

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Sesshomarul182 In reply to KomradApex [2015-05-07 20:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Well her clothes are a blue T-shirt and a normal jeans. Is this ok?

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KomradApex In reply to Sesshomarul182 [2015-05-07 21:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Sounds alright.

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HorrorLasagna In reply to ??? [2015-04-24 22:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Question: How would you be able to avoid Gary-sues? We're working on a character that may be too powerful and that's something I'd like to avoid.

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KomradApex In reply to HorrorLasagna [2015-04-25 10:11:54 +0000 UTC]

I recommend you read this guide I wrote, which is mainly about Mary Sue traits but would also apply to Gary Stu-type characters:
How to Avoid Making Your Creepypasta OC a Mary SueHow to Avoid Making Your Creepypasta OC a Mary Sue
For this part of my continuing series on making a quality OC, we’re going to talk about the most dreaded two words for any serious author: “Mary Sue”, or “Gary Stu” as it’s called for male characters.
What is a Mary Sue? Different people seem to have different definitions but there is one in particular I am familiar with, and the one most often found in creepypasta Mary Sues. This is the type that is basically the author, only cooler, sexier, and always quick with a bad punchline when they kill someone, with more friends than the author does but still oh so tragic and misunderstood. They probably have cat ears and maybe a mask. And they are always way, way overpowered. Oh, and all the male creepypastas are in love with them. You know the type of character I’m talking about.
Now, not every character that has just a few of these traits is a Mary Sue. So don’t jump the gun and throw away a c

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Dragonwolf505 In reply to ??? [2015-04-19 00:45:45 +0000 UTC]

hey, new oc idea, cause its me again, would a good oc be a human-like creator that's only purpose is to eat humans, like a predator, cause i like the idea, also, sorry for last comment i was on my phone and forgot which oc i had been talking about.

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KomradApex In reply to Dragonwolf505 [2015-04-19 15:17:47 +0000 UTC]

The most important thing for a good OC is a solid backstory. Get that right, and I don't see how it can go wrong.

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Dragonwolf505 In reply to ??? [2015-04-08 19:41:46 +0000 UTC]

What about a thin black cat with a jack-o-lantern head for an oc?

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KomradApex In reply to Dragonwolf505 [2015-04-08 20:46:24 +0000 UTC]

It sounds a little too cuddly. Maybe if you could add a detail that would make it scarier, gorier, or tougher?

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Dragonwolf505 In reply to KomradApex [2015-04-10 02:19:07 +0000 UTC]

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KomradApex In reply to Dragonwolf505 [2015-04-10 13:36:26 +0000 UTC]

I guess?

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Dragonwolf505 In reply to KomradApex [2015-04-19 00:43:20 +0000 UTC]

last comment was messed up, and one detail is that if the pumpkin falls off there is a shredded head, forgot to mention that.

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UnknownRiver314 In reply to ??? [2015-04-07 05:10:09 +0000 UTC]

I know you said we should create our own ocs but I just can't do it. I was wondering if you could help me create my creepypasta, please.

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UnknownRiver314 In reply to UnknownRiver314 [2015-04-10 02:47:23 +0000 UTC]

I need your help again

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UnknownRiver314 In reply to UnknownRiver314 [2015-04-07 14:49:25 +0000 UTC]

It's just that you write amazing ideas where as I write some that don't stick. But if you can give me ideas or tips then that'll help.

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KomradApex In reply to UnknownRiver314 [2015-04-07 14:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I don't do stuff like that. I'd be happy to give advice on a creepypasta you're working on, but I can't help you make one from the ground up. If I did that it'd be more like my character than yours.

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UnknownRiver314 In reply to KomradApex [2015-04-08 00:29:23 +0000 UTC]

I had done it! I had created a great creepypasta but then I realized someone else already came up with it. Now I'm at rock bottom again. Now what?

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KomradApex In reply to UnknownRiver314 [2015-04-08 01:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Nothing to do but try again from scratch. It may sound unappealing, but there's really no shortcut or anything.

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UnknownRiver314 In reply to KomradApex [2015-06-19 02:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Hey its been awhile since I talked to you. I finally created my Creepypasta.

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KomradApex In reply to UnknownRiver314 [2015-06-19 11:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Congrats!

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UnknownRiver314 In reply to KomradApex [2015-07-05 02:14:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for helping well everything. To be I honest I thought that I would fail poorly at creating a Creepypasta oc. But you're 'how to' actually helped, keep doing what you do and encourage more people to create a great Creepypasta. I hope I can call you a good friend. Once again thanks.

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KomradApex In reply to UnknownRiver314 [2015-07-05 20:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for such kind words! I'm glad you feel I helped.

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UnknownRiver314 In reply to KomradApex [2015-07-08 02:30:15 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Now if only I could somehow bring her to life.

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AnxietySloth In reply to ??? [2015-04-06 22:46:32 +0000 UTC]

Hi ^^ I see that this is really old but i was wondering if you could evaluate my OC Fixx? You seem to be a bit more mature and won't just say she sucks or anything. Thanks for reading!~<3

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KomradApex In reply to AnxietySloth [2015-04-06 23:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Could you give me a link or provide some information about her or such?

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AnxietySloth In reply to KomradApex [2015-04-07 00:21:03 +0000 UTC]

anxietysloth.deviantart.com/ar…

Her overall story(before becoming a pasta, how it happened, and the origin of her knife) are still in the works. I recently decided to revise it but if you'd like a general run down, I'll write that. It will be brief and sound crappy but i plan to write it much better, for she basically captures my life cx
She was always a perfect kid until she reached 7th grade and was continuously held to her high standards. She started getting bullied and abused by her peers and parents and later in the year turned to cigarettes and drugs. Later attempting suicide but not succeeding, she was admitted to a mental hospital for roughly 3 months. From then is when I've decided to re-write it because my younger self wasn't the best with writing but the plan is yada yada she can't stand pills yada gets worse yada eventualy loses it yada gets involved with the other Pastas. Her knife, which I'm going to write a story for because everyone seems to think if it's a knife it was pulled from the kitchen drawer (which hers was not), is a family heirloom passed down generation going back to roughly WW1 or maybe earlier. But I apologize for this being so long. i just would like to get help on  all my OCs but Fixx is my main OC for obvious reasons. So again sorry but maybe you could give your thoughts?

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KomradApex In reply to AnxietySloth [2015-04-07 01:55:27 +0000 UTC]

I'd advise not making her start out perfect (people can't sympathize with perfect characters), maybe making her have a friend she relied on who betrayed her instead of the cliched "abuse from everyone" theme, and making her appearance more threatening and less cute.
I do like the idea of giving a sort of backstory for her knife. That sounds like something that could really be a unique part of her character.

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AnxietySloth In reply to KomradApex [2015-04-07 02:16:49 +0000 UTC]

Yea, I'm working on other designs for outfits and other stuff .-.
But thank you so much I read through all your other OC posts to help with other OCs i have, and i really liked them! Added them all to my favorites so i can find them later ^^
Thanks again!

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KomradApex In reply to AnxietySloth [2015-04-07 14:37:45 +0000 UTC]

No problem. I also thank you for being able to deal with constructive feedback. Too many people get irritated at honest advice.

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AnxietySloth In reply to KomradApex [2015-04-07 22:00:56 +0000 UTC]

I get that, people ask for honesty and then get mad about it. You asked haha. Anyways greatly appreciated! Have a good day~<3

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Aegis00 In reply to ??? [2015-04-01 12:00:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks for some advices, I'm still new in CP fandom and I'm gonna do some surveys(collecting informations lol) before making a CP OC :3

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KomradApex In reply to Aegis00 [2015-04-01 15:54:23 +0000 UTC]

That sounds like a good idea.

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SouthDakota13 In reply to ??? [2015-03-19 21:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Can you take a look at my oc please? southdakota13.deviantart.com/j…

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KomradApex In reply to SouthDakota13 [2015-03-19 22:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Sure.

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Forest-Child232 In reply to ??? [2015-02-14 01:16:32 +0000 UTC]

What's your opinion on queer characters? I'm making an OC who's trans and aromantic but I'm worried about the reactions that people will have.

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KomradApex In reply to Forest-Child232 [2015-02-14 11:27:08 +0000 UTC]

This is the Internet, and a website for left-wing artsy types at that. I seriously doubt anyone will complain. Just for the record, I'm extremely right-wing but I'm actually bisexual. So yeah.
I'd advise you to focus more on avoiding common Mary Sue traps such as being overly bubbly in personality, shipping them with a popular canon pasta, or wearing ridiculously impractical over-sexualized clothing and the like. The best OCs are the ones that feel realistic.
If you've got any more questions don't hesitate to ask.

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Forest-Child232 In reply to KomradApex [2015-03-01 08:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your reply. I finished making my character with your advice in mind. IDK if you would want to, but I would greatly appreciate any feedback or advice. forest-child232.deviantart.com… (sorry to keep bothering you -_-)

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KomradApex In reply to Forest-Child232 [2015-03-01 17:32:27 +0000 UTC]

I'll check em out.

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Forest-Child232 In reply to KomradApex [2015-03-02 09:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Much appreciated c:

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lozfan15 In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-20 05:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Really? I'm bi-curious. Another clique I'm sick and tired of is the whole "Deep down inside, _____ doesn't like to do _____" THEN WHY DOES S/HE DO IT!? (This is for the killer cpocs out there."

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KomradApex In reply to lozfan15 [2015-02-20 14:03:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it is pretty tiresome.

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IWishToDrawBetter In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 20:54:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, so far I found this extremely helpful, thank you! I'm going to read the others after I finish typing this.

Anyways, what I just wanted to say was this:
My OC doesn't have a mask, and I'm glad she doesn't (Masks ARE kind of overused now, huh?). She, instead, has bandages over her eyes.

Yeah, that's really it. But thanks for creating this, it really helps me!

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KomradApex In reply to IWishToDrawBetter [2015-02-10 22:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Bandages, eh? Sounds interesting. And I'm glad you found this helpful, that's what I hoped for when making it.

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IWishToDrawBetter In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-11 11:33:51 +0000 UTC]

 

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president-m-blue In reply to ??? [2015-02-09 22:35:00 +0000 UTC]

I have every single detail of my oc except what to call him and I just can't figure it out!

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KomradApex In reply to president-m-blue [2015-02-09 22:38:57 +0000 UTC]

I might be able to help. What can you tell me about him?

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Cthul-Aid In reply to ??? [2015-02-01 16:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Could you perhaps give me feedback on my OC? O.o cthul-aid.deviantart.com/art/C…

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KomradApex In reply to Cthul-Aid [2015-02-01 18:18:18 +0000 UTC]

Sure, I'll leave a comment with my thoughts.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 18:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Alright, thanks. And apologies in advance, new to this type of thing.

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