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KomradApex — Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for Dummies
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Description Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for Dummies

So, you’ve probably seen all the awesome OCs floating around on DA. You may have heard that creepypasta OCs are hard to create. That’s not true at all, and I’ll show you why in a bit. Or maybe you received criticism for an earlier OC of yours. Well, even if your character is in fact poorly designed, all legitimate art is still art. So while you shouldn’t ignore constructive criticism, you shouldn’t listen to the haters. I’ve noticed most of those people don’t even do art at all and just troll the forums and insult shippings that aren’t their personal favourites. What losers, eh?

Which in a way brings me to my first point which is more about how to avoid criticism: don’t ship your character with an existing pasta unless you have permission. The original creator probably wouldn’t approve if they knew, and it’s just bad form. Nothing brings the critics out like making your super kawaii OC into Jeff the Killer’s girlfriend, and frankly I can see why. Besides, if you’re so set on romance why not just ship them with another OC of yours? That way no one’s going to get pissed off about the pairing, and if they do you can tell them to shut up because you’re their parent and they only date who you want.

Now, like every good story, every good OC needs a theme. What’s their motivation? Their background? Why do they do the things they do? And please give a better answer than something like “They went crazy, killed their family, and became a proxy”. To give example questions, why did they go crazy? Was their family abusive? Is that why killed them? How’d they become a proxy? Why exactly did Slenderman spare them? Did they have a talent he could use?

I find it helps to write a character profile/mini biography about a page long on size eleven type. Here's a sample one I made for one of my characters: shacklesoul.deviantart.com/art… . This will help give them a unique personality and flavour to set them apart from all those boring, generic creepypasta OCs out there. I can’t help you come up with their personality nor should I, but this is the fun part anyway. Don’t just ask yourself what sort of things they like and dislike. Rather, why do they like or dislike those things? How was their childhood? How do they usually interact with the world when it doesn’t involve killing? These are all just sample questions, I’m sure you will think of many more.

On the subject of your character’s backstory, please, treat dark subjects like rape and incest with respect. It is both disrespectful and ignorant to make them into some throwaway little feature. Not only does adding “And they were raped” really add nothing, it turns something which is incredibly dark into an unimportant detail. If you have to use these subjects, remember, use them as an important subject of horror and revulsion to make your character more tragic, not a teensy footnote. Believe me, if sexual abuse is treated as though it is just another detail it feels tacked-on and makes you as the author seem both uncaring and unimaginative.

Now that we’ve got that out of the way, we’re onto an aspect you probably already have in your head: physical appearance. What they look like, in other words. Let your imagination run wild; remember, this is horror so anything scary is possible. If you’re really having trouble thinking of something that hasn’t been done before, come up with a list of interesting details and then pick and choose ones which work well together until you have your character. As for drawing them, well, I’m more of a writer so you could probably teach me more in that area!

One last little thing about appearances. MASKS. F*&%ING MASKS. Why does every pasta have to have a mask now?! Okay, two of my OCs have masks but they’re at least original masks, not knockoffs of Eyeless Jack’s that were probably made in China! Seriously. Why masks? Sorry, it’s just a real pet peeve of mine. Masks aren’t bad, they’re just a little overdone so if you give your OC a mask, make it a damn good mask.

And that’s pretty much all I know. OCs are a lot of fun, and remember, no one’s OCs are perfect in the rough draft but just keep refining it and you’ll get better. Listen to the good advice you get, ignore the haters, and most of all be creative!
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KomradApex In reply to ??? [2015-02-01 18:30:24 +0000 UTC]

I loved it, actually. I'll admit I was skeptical at first because I've been seeing so many mediocre or outright bad OCs lately, but Doctor Euphoria is pretty damn cool.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 18:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'd appreciate if you could give me any tips to improve on him. ewe

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KomradApex In reply to Cthul-Aid [2015-02-01 18:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you could make him have a bit of a vulnerable side? Not in a sentimental way, but in the sense that he feels insecure, or really fears getting caught and executed, something along those lines.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 18:50:39 +0000 UTC]

The fear of getting caught and killed sounds good. It would also contribute to one of his weaknesses.

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KomradApex In reply to Cthul-Aid [2015-02-01 19:00:21 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. It might be interesting if he was extremely paranoid and wary about that sort of thing 24/7.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 20:17:26 +0000 UTC]

I wrote a new pasta, if you are interested in reading it.

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KomradApex In reply to Cthul-Aid [2015-02-01 20:29:38 +0000 UTC]

I'd be glad to, can you give me a link?

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 20:32:01 +0000 UTC]

cthul-aid.deviantart.com/art/T… There you go, it's sorta filler into the backstory.  

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KomradApex In reply to Cthul-Aid [2015-02-01 21:01:31 +0000 UTC]

Cool, I'll take a look in a sec.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 21:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 19:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but won't make it as obvious, because he still has to keep up the therapist front.

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KomradApex In reply to Cthul-Aid [2015-02-01 19:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah, true. It would be a delicate balancing act he'd have to maintain, appearing respectable and professional whilst committing murders.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 19:14:53 +0000 UTC]

Yep, he may get caught, but he just may able to talk his way out of it...or pump Nitrous Oxide into the building.

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KomradApex In reply to Cthul-Aid [2015-02-01 19:17:08 +0000 UTC]

I think we just got a glimpse of his last-ditch option. The idea of him strolling with a gas mask on his face through the building, with contorting SWAT team personell laughing hysterically on the floor around him, is almost too eerie.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 19:20:11 +0000 UTC]

While he is calmly stepping over bodies, with his hands behind his back. ...That is really eerie.

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KomradApex In reply to Cthul-Aid [2015-02-01 19:27:33 +0000 UTC]

And I've always thought that gas masks, even by themselves, look inherently menacing and inscrutable at the same time.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to KomradApex [2015-02-01 19:29:42 +0000 UTC]

Same.

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Cthul-Aid In reply to Cthul-Aid [2015-02-01 19:24:58 +0000 UTC]

Would it be a good idea to create about two OC's of his assistants?... In the event he does get caught. People to take on the legacy, in a way.

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Alyssatheunicorn In reply to ??? [2015-01-25 01:31:47 +0000 UTC]

i need help naming my oc

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KomradApex In reply to Alyssatheunicorn [2015-01-25 19:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Can you tell me anything about her character?

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Alyssatheunicorn In reply to KomradApex [2015-01-25 21:08:55 +0000 UTC]

If you go on my profile I made a Journal that tells all about her. For now i. Using midnight  but I don't want that to be her actual name

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KomradApex In reply to Alyssatheunicorn [2015-01-25 21:16:45 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Ebony, since ebony is both a dark colour and a type of wood frequently used for building coffins?

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Alyssatheunicorn In reply to KomradApex [2015-01-25 21:18:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow that's actually a good name. I will keep that in mind ^_^

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niffertepigz In reply to ??? [2015-01-18 14:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Can you please tell me how to improve my new OC haven't got a proper story yet though :\ She like has long tendril like hair that is its own separate kind of creature and she has a large jaw with sharp teeth and she uses her hair to pull her victims in and rip them up with her teeth. something like that.

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KomradApex In reply to niffertepigz [2015-01-18 17:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Well, I guess that sounds okay for a physical description, but you really need to give her a personality, backstory, motivation(s), etc. Physical description is secondary. Just look at Slenderman. He's a faceless pale thing that wears a suit, and yet he's considered one of the all-time classics.

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YamiKlaus In reply to ??? [2015-01-10 01:24:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you! I hate when people do that. People have been taking my oc and using it's idea, it's annoying me!

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KomradApex In reply to YamiKlaus [2015-01-10 13:01:04 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. I don't think it's too much to ask someone to be original.

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YamiKlaus In reply to KomradApex [2015-01-10 15:51:43 +0000 UTC]

yep^^

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foxy-and-mangle In reply to ??? [2014-12-31 03:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the advice! Is it okay if I link this in a Do's and Don'ts of Creepypasta OCs I'm making? I just wanted to ask before doing it to avoid any troubles.

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KomradApex In reply to foxy-and-mangle [2014-12-31 12:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Sure, go right ahead! I'd be flattered.

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Ramdomnessisnormal In reply to ??? [2014-12-11 03:48:24 +0000 UTC]

duz this sound cool, there were twins one was named Lily and was always nice to every one, the other one was named Lilian and was rude and reblious.in their senoir school year they were bullied Lilian protected Lily,they were really close until something happened with Lily. It was a ordinary day they went to their classes,and met up at lunch, but the girl who bullied her showed up at their groups table,and said give me your money all of you.Something snapped in Lilys mind she replied and said no.the girl walked over to her and pushed her,and said what are you gonna do about it.there were sudden chants in the room "FIGHT". the preassure was intenceing,Lily snapped and tackled the girl and started punching her as hard as she could, her sister was trying to stop her. It was to late Lily killed the girl. she ran out of the lunch room.and was never heard from again.

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Ramdomnessisnormal In reply to ??? [2014-12-11 03:28:17 +0000 UTC]

pshh amatuers,creepypastas r real and everytime u create one it comes ALIVE!!!! so stop freakin trying top make more murders <3 Lily the feral

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kanameo In reply to Ramdomnessisnormal [2016-04-07 18:57:49 +0000 UTC]

no offence,but are you being serious?

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RubikVonFlix In reply to ??? [2014-11-29 04:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Umm... For masks I was wondering if a wolf skull would be a good mask, is it unoriginal? I was just wondering.

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KomradApex In reply to RubikVonFlix [2014-11-29 15:42:09 +0000 UTC]

That sounds pretty cool, actually.

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RubikVonFlix In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-29 17:24:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh.. Thanks

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LadyPikachu12 In reply to ??? [2014-11-28 17:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Commenter

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KomradApex In reply to LadyPikachu12 [2014-11-28 17:35:14 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't really seem scary or interesting to me, personally, and some parts are really confusing. I'm sorry if that sounds harsh, but you may want to try asking a friend of yours who writes to help come up with a realistic sequence of events. I'd offer but I'm busy trying to figure out a user manual for some drawing software at the moment.

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LadyPikachu12 In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-28 17:41:31 +0000 UTC]

i haven't really finished it it would make more sence if the whole story was readen

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KomradApex In reply to LadyPikachu12 [2014-11-28 17:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Alright. Don't abandon it, but keep working on her and try to refine her character.

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LadyPikachu12 In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-28 18:56:41 +0000 UTC]

okay will do^^
thanks

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Waragainstgiygas In reply to ??? [2014-11-26 09:05:14 +0000 UTC]

Can the mask be simple? my oc currently has a top-half masquerade-like mask.

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KomradApex In reply to Waragainstgiygas [2014-11-26 14:21:30 +0000 UTC]

That sounds fine by me.

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Waragainstgiygas In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-26 18:04:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you, I was scared my oc would be too unoriginal

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BronyForgotten In reply to ??? [2014-11-19 18:33:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this should help! Thanks! But...does a Creepypasta have to have a creepy story to them? Yes, I know, you have to tell why the character went crazy. But as a person that focuses on the character's journey and story more, does a Creepypasta have to always scare people?

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KomradApex In reply to BronyForgotten [2014-11-19 18:38:37 +0000 UTC]

I'd say it should at least be a bit unsettling, although it's really up to you. I think you could probably figure out a way to focus on the individual's journey and story and make it scary at the same time, if you wanted.

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BronyForgotten In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-19 19:15:20 +0000 UTC]

I guess...seeing as he enjoys messing with his victims heads...I could show what the victim is seeing.

And there is that whole 'I'm going to change my face to look like a spider's!' thing he does willy nilly.

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KomradApex In reply to BronyForgotten [2014-11-19 19:27:14 +0000 UTC]

That sounds feasible. Just make sure you have fun writing it. If it's not enjoyable for you as the creator then it's kinda pointless in the end.

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BronyForgotten In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-19 19:57:54 +0000 UTC]

True. If you don't enjoy it, stop. That pretty much goes without saying. But enjoyment is always fun. Like, say, ideas along the lines of him just turning his limbs into shark heads and chasing a guy. While singing a silly song.

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KomradApex In reply to BronyForgotten [2014-11-19 20:03:13 +0000 UTC]

I'd pay to see that movie.

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