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Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for DummiesSo, you’ve probably seen all the awesome OCs floating around on DA. You may have heard that creepypasta OCs are hard to create. That’s not true at all, and I’ll show you why in a bit. Or maybe you received criticism for an earlier OC of yours. Well, even if your character is in fact poorly designed, all legitimate art is still art. So while you shouldn’t ignore constructive criticism, you shouldn’t listen to the haters. I’ve noticed most of those people don’t even do art at all and just troll the forums and insult shippings that aren’t their personal favourites. What losers, eh?
Which in a way brings me to my first point which is more about how to avoid criticism: don’t ship your character with an existing pasta unless you have permission. The original creator probably wouldn’t approve if they knew, and it’s just bad form. Nothing brings the critics out like making your super kawaii OC into Jeff the Killer’s girlfriend, and frankly I can see why. Besides, if you’re so set on romance why not just ship them with another OC of yours? That way no one’s going to get pissed off about the pairing, and if they do you can tell them to shut up because you’re their parent and they only date who you want.
Now, like every good story, every good OC needs a theme. What’s their motivation? Their background? Why do they do the things they do? And please give a better answer than something like “They went crazy, killed their family, and became a proxy”. To give example questions, why did they go crazy? Was their family abusive? Is that why killed them? How’d they become a proxy? Why exactly did Slenderman spare them? Did they have a talent he could use?
I find it helps to write a character profile/mini biography about a page long on size eleven type. Here's a sample one I made for one of my characters: shacklesoul.deviantart.com/art… . This will help give them a unique personality and flavour to set them apart from all those boring, generic creepypasta OCs out there. I can’t help you come up with their personality nor should I, but this is the fun part anyway. Don’t just ask yourself what sort of things they like and dislike. Rather, why do they like or dislike those things? How was their childhood? How do they usually interact with the world when it doesn’t involve killing? These are all just sample questions, I’m sure you will think of many more.
On the subject of your character’s backstory, please, treat dark subjects like rape and incest with respect. It is both disrespectful and ignorant to make them into some throwaway little feature. Not only does adding “And they were raped” really add nothing, it turns something which is incredibly dark into an unimportant detail. If you have to use these subjects, remember, use them as an important subject of horror and revulsion to make your character more tragic, not a teensy footnote. Believe me, if sexual abuse is treated as though it is just another detail it feels tacked-on and makes you as the author seem both uncaring and unimaginative.
Now that we’ve got that out of the way, we’re onto an aspect you probably already have in your head: physical appearance. What they look like, in other words. Let your imagination run wild; remember, this is horror so anything scary is possible. If you’re really having trouble thinking of something that hasn’t been done before, come up with a list of interesting details and then pick and choose ones which work well together until you have your character. As for drawing them, well, I’m more of a writer so you could probably teach me more in that area!
One last little thing about appearances. MASKS. F*&%ING MASKS. Why does every pasta have to have a mask now?! Okay, two of my OCs have masks but they’re at least original masks, not knockoffs of Eyeless Jack’s that were probably made in China! Seriously. Why masks? Sorry, it’s just a real pet peeve of mine. Masks aren’t bad, they’re just a little overdone so if you give your OC a mask, make it a damn good mask.
And that’s pretty much all I know. OCs are a lot of fun, and remember, no one’s OCs are perfect in the rough draft but just keep refining it and you’ll get better. Listen to the good advice you get, ignore the haters, and most of all be creative!
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CrooksLaughter In reply to ??? [2014-11-15 15:44:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for this helpful guide. One question: would it seem okay if my character wore a red sweater, black pants, and was a mute?
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KomradApex In reply to CrooksLaughter [2014-11-15 16:42:16 +0000 UTC]
I don't see why not. Of course, their story and nature as a character matter more than physical appearance.
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CrooksLaughter In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-16 00:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. She has her share of weaknesses and strengths.
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KomradApex In reply to CrooksLaughter [2014-11-16 00:17:35 +0000 UTC]
That's good, balance is essential when designing any character.
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CrooksLaughter In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-16 21:48:12 +0000 UTC]
Once I am done with her story, would you mind reviewing it? When you have time of course.
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KomradApex In reply to CrooksLaughter [2014-11-16 21:56:04 +0000 UTC]
Sure, I'll take a look if you can remind me when it's out. :3
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CrooksLaughter In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-16 21:57:13 +0000 UTC]
Okay!! Thanks!!!! I'll start as soon as I can!!!
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Tsukasa57 In reply to ??? [2014-10-20 19:13:32 +0000 UTC]
thank you for these advices and suggestions
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KomradApex In reply to Tsukasa57 [2014-10-20 19:22:41 +0000 UTC]
No problem, I hope they're of some use to you. ^^
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OrionKuwisaki In reply to ??? [2014-10-17 23:25:25 +0000 UTC]
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 other games. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
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KomradApex In reply to OrionKuwisaki [2014-10-17 23:50:53 +0000 UTC]
Wow it actually worked
WAITNOITDIDN'T
*gasp*
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VampirePrincessKT In reply to ??? [2014-10-09 00:31:25 +0000 UTC]
Hi!
This actually helped me a lot, Thank you by the way.
But i still have some questions...
I always wanted to have a creepypasta OC but it scares me a little bit the fact that she could be a Mary Sue or something like that, so im trying to give my best.
Well, i havent finished her story yet.
So i'd like to know how to dress her, i wouldnt like that much if she wears a hoodie just like another creepypastas. But i dont have an idea of what would be the best for a creepypasta to wear... Like, not so ''dresses and skirts'' and not so ''hoodies''
I really dont know!!
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KomradApex In reply to VampirePrincessKT [2014-10-09 10:32:12 +0000 UTC]
It doesn't really matter all that much what she wears, so long as the clothing is practical in nature.
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IHaveWritersBlock In reply to ??? [2014-09-22 00:49:45 +0000 UTC]
Um well i had this OC in mind but she isn't scary at all, basically she's just a normal human physco killer who kills with a bow and arrow. I mean is that alright? cause I don't want to make her scary cause she can't be seen by others so I don't think there's any point in making her scary if she can't be seen I mean do i have to make her look scary? I mean Masky and Hoodie are just men with masks on (no offense) so is that alright or nah.
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KomradApex In reply to IHaveWritersBlock [2014-09-22 10:37:55 +0000 UTC]
I think it's fine just so long as her personality is fitting with someone who kills. For isntance, it wouldn't make sense for her to be cheery and nice if she also kills people, obviously.
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IHaveWritersBlock In reply to KomradApex [2014-09-22 12:19:37 +0000 UTC]
So would a cold, heartless, not-that-emotional, whatever-i-don't-care personality account? If so thank you so much it really means alot
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KomradApex In reply to IHaveWritersBlock [2014-09-22 12:23:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I'd say that would fit quite nicely.
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CreepyBaka98 In reply to ??? [2014-08-29 21:40:38 +0000 UTC]
Shackle Soul, can you make me a creepypasta character?
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KomradApex In reply to CreepyBaka98 [2014-08-29 21:55:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm afraid I don't actually design characters for others. I can help in a sense if you design a character yourself by offering my opinion on it.
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TypicalAddict In reply to ??? [2014-08-11 07:02:09 +0000 UTC]
what if its not a pairing but a result?
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TypicalAddict In reply to TypicalAddict [2014-08-16 02:18:10 +0000 UTC]
No non or at all XD I'm pretty bad at explaining things thanks for actually awnsering people's questions. Have a good one
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KomradApex In reply to TypicalAddict [2014-08-11 10:28:49 +0000 UTC]
What do you mean by that?
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TypicalAddict In reply to KomradApex [2014-08-12 02:12:18 +0000 UTC]
XD sorry I meant what if I made a character that resulted in being different because of one of the creepy characters but is not in any way romantically involved with any of them. Let's say an encounter with one transformed them in some way..
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KomradApex In reply to TypicalAddict [2014-08-12 16:07:09 +0000 UTC]
That seems to be perfectly fine. Thanks for explaining, I can be pretty dense sometimes. XD
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Carbadonia101 In reply to ??? [2014-08-05 11:43:45 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait to try and apply this to my idea, Silent Jack
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KomradApex In reply to Carbadonia101 [2014-08-05 11:44:33 +0000 UTC]
Cool. I wish you the best of luck on it. ^^
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Carbadonia101 In reply to KomradApex [2014-08-06 05:29:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks bro, as soon as I finish him I shall sent a Note with his story with the title doing something probably related to a Farm
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Vampire-Kitties In reply to ??? [2014-07-31 04:01:22 +0000 UTC]
Can yew review Toh Luka once I get her bio and things up? :3
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KomradApex In reply to Vampire-Kitties [2014-07-31 10:51:55 +0000 UTC]
Sure. Just link me to her.
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Vampire-Kitties In reply to KomradApex [2014-07-31 16:39:37 +0000 UTC]
I still need to finish writing up her bio.
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KomradApex In reply to Vampire-Kitties [2014-07-31 16:40:18 +0000 UTC]
Alright, be sure to let me know when it's done. :3
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Vampire-Kitties In reply to KomradApex [2014-07-31 16:56:27 +0000 UTC]
Ill work on it now.
I love how I made her jacket, it looks just like mine xD
Stap stealing my jacket Toh Luka!
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jjtninja In reply to ??? [2014-07-07 19:33:14 +0000 UTC]
I will agree with the last bit, masks can be awesome...but they're overused.
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KomradApex In reply to jjtninja [2014-07-07 19:45:16 +0000 UTC]
True dat. It's always a shame when a good idea becomes cliché.
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The-Cat-Loving-Kid In reply to ??? [2014-07-03 11:22:38 +0000 UTC]
This is really helpful! I know I'll be using this in future to fine tune future OCs!
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KomradApex In reply to The-Cat-Loving-Kid [2014-07-03 11:31:14 +0000 UTC]
Glad to be of help. ^^
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Atraxiella In reply to ??? [2014-07-01 03:23:39 +0000 UTC]
With the mask, well what exactly is a NO?
i get not to have the E.J design but I'm kinda lost
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KomradApex In reply to Atraxiella [2014-07-01 12:12:46 +0000 UTC]
It's just a personal pet peeve of mine. I feel masks for OCs are a bit overdone, but there are really no specific masks other than EJ clones that I actually dislike. One suggestion might be to use something like facepaint, scars, piercings, tattoos, or other facial markings instead of a mask.
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GrimmBulbasaur In reply to ??? [2014-05-17 18:28:53 +0000 UTC]
about that mask thing... okay if mine is more of a gasmask thing?
here is an older picture of what i mean:
fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/201…
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KomradApex In reply to GrimmBulbasaur [2014-05-17 18:54:53 +0000 UTC]
What I mention here are just guidelines, but I should mention I have an OC with a gas mask too. Gas masks are also practical in addition to looking cool and adding to a character's uniqueness, so I think it's a fine idea.
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GrimmBulbasaur In reply to KomradApex [2014-05-17 23:19:35 +0000 UTC]
okay thanks X3 i seriously enjoy reading these by the way
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EPICGOOFBALL In reply to ??? [2014-05-01 21:49:38 +0000 UTC]
Does this guy seem okay to you? He seems to be my watchers' favorite.
~epicgoofball.deviantart.com/ar…
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KomradApex In reply to EPICGOOFBALL [2014-05-01 23:19:36 +0000 UTC]
He's a good character, he just seems a bit plain the way he's written right at the moment.
I left a more detailed critique on the deviation. I hope it helps.
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Junabugcreepypastas In reply to ??? [2014-04-19 07:14:01 +0000 UTC]
My Oc "Star-Struck" has a half mask it covers half her face and it looks pretty cool in my opinion. But back to this. THANK YOU! This is SO helpful. I'm focusing on my favorite OC "Midnight Nightmare" who I'm trying to think of a good story. The sample questions are going to help me with making her. I'm aware she isn't really scary but she is goth mixed with young which is a hard combination. So thanks for your help
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KomradApex In reply to Junabugcreepypastas [2014-04-19 12:57:27 +0000 UTC]
If you think the mask looks cool, then I say it probably is. And thank you! I really appreciate nice feedback when I manage to help someone.
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Elgrig In reply to ??? [2014-04-08 03:12:23 +0000 UTC]
Mine has a mask and it's pretty badass
And I would avoid once human trait or suicide trait,or anything human. It's pretty boring and the risk of being overdone is high...and being proxies,good thing you mention proxies.
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KomradApex In reply to Elgrig [2014-04-08 08:39:03 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you on the suicide trait, I think it's very overused.
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niqhtliqhtts In reply to ??? [2014-04-08 01:44:02 +0000 UTC]
My CPOCs have masks ;-;
I don't know if this has been done before, but I guess I just kind of want to ask if these are ok masks. The masks my CPOCs have are kind of split, like broken. Since my CPOCs are brother and sister, they each have a half, and the mask is kind of hot-glued onto their faces. They mainly put the mask halves on so they could sort of conceal their faces from the authorities. Here's a screenshot of one of the mask halves if you're interested: prntscr.com/3808yv
But yeah, I hope this mask is good o'Wo if not, then could I have some suggestions...? Thanks in advance!
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KomradApex In reply to niqhtliqhtts [2014-04-08 08:40:05 +0000 UTC]
I'd say that's a good mask design, if only because it doesn't look like most of the other masks out there.
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