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My first attempt at concrete poetry, submitted to 's concrete poetry workshop.

The guidance was to try to re-structure a poem you had already written. Unfortunately, much of what I've written is pretty long, and I think this would have been more effective if I'd had something shorter to work with. Still, I enjoyed reworking an older piece, as it did help to add a new dimension of meaning to it for me.

EDIT: so I changed the picture to leave out any of the bold bits in the skirt. I've kept the shading on the legs, bevcause I don't think that was as confusing as the shading in the skirt

EDIT 2: Wow, DD?? Seriously?? Totally gobsmacked! Thank you to everyone for the lovely comments and the faves! Totally made my week This has definitely encouraged me to experiment more with concrete poetry!

Description
My first attempt at concrete poetry, submitted to 's concrete poetry workshop.

The guidance was to try to re-structure a poem you had already written. Unfortunately, much of what I've written is pretty long, and I think this would have been more effective if I'd had something shorter to work with. Still, I enjoyed reworking an older piece, as it did help to add a new dimension of meaning to it for me.

EDIT: so I changed the picture to leave out any of the bold bits in the skirt. I've kept the shading on the legs, bevcause I don't think that was as confusing as the shading in the skirt

EDIT 2: Wow, DD?? Seriously?? Totally gobsmacked! Thank you to everyone for the lovely comments and the faves! Totally made my week This has definitely encouraged me to experiment more with concrete poetry!